My Shot at Jesus
When Tom Delvecchio demurredthey sayHe didnt want to wear his mothers gownI got my shot at Jesus. We were downTo just a week before the Easter play.St. Rose of Limas pageant was aboutAs close as you...
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Rick, I like this very much, except for line 13. I think line 14 merits a better lead in. The title is great and will guarantee that many people will read the poem just to see what it's about. I'd...
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Rick, I like this very much, despite the somewhat off-center rhyme in your couplet.And I'd really like to see the capital letters at the beginnings of each line go, unless they actually start a...
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Hi Rick,This is a touching tribute to the institution of the Sunday School pageant.I agree, L13 is the weakness of the poem - you must be able to do something cool with a belief\hankerchief...
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